Cats
were supposed to have nine lives, but Toshi had definitely had at least
fifteen. It was like the guy couldn’t
stay out of trouble. Zach had spotted him in Japan, a kitten
stranded on the median of a busy street.
Zach had basically jumped out of the taxi to save him.
He
wasn’t sure a little kitten like that would even survive the thirty-hour plane
trip home, but he did, and grew up into a handsome and fearless warrior. There
was the time he fought the raccoon and came home with his forehead gashed open.
He fell out of a tree once when he was chasing a squirrel, right in front of
everybody, and broke his little white ankle. And then he had sprouted that
tumor on his back and the vet said there was a ninety percent chance the cancer
had spread, but no, cancer didn’t spread.
But Toshi was old now, old as the hills, a frail old man being slowly
laid to waste by, of all the mundane things, diabetes.
Zach
found him on Tuesday morning, stretched out in front of the heater even though
it wasn’t on, stiff and motionless. His
eyes were closed. Zach hoped it had been
peaceful.
So
that was it. Seventeen good years. You couldn’t ask for much more than
that.
Zach
cried for a minute, as he knelt down over his dead friend, his roommate and
family for the last couple decades, but he wasn’t really much of a crier.
He
hadn’t thought about what he would do with the body. He should have been thinking about it, probably
for the last few years, but who wants to think about something like that. Now he knew, though. It came to him as simple as a haiku.
He
went to his closet, reached up into a box at the top where he kept his travel souvenirs,
not a lot of them, pulled out the folded Japanese flag. He wrapped Toshi in it, jumped in the car,
and headed for the hills.
I so love where this is going; this opening is great, and it made me sad for you because I know some of it's about Pesty. The writing here is just so tender and lovely: Zach hoped it had been peaceful.
ReplyDeleteSo that was it. Seventeen good years. You couldn’t ask for much more than that.
Zach cried for a minute, as he knelt down over his dead friend, his roommate and family for the last couple decades, but he wasn’t really much of a crier.
The haiku comparison is perfect, not just for the idea that comes to Zach but for the entire piece. The language and style are simple, straight-forward, and concrete on the surface--but so much emotion underneath. The narrator's almost human-like descriptions of Toshi and Toshi's backstory speak to the closeness between Zach and Toshi. Implied but not overstated, like a haiku, in lines like "he grew into a handsome and fearless warrior," "like the guy couldn't stay out of trouble," and "he knelt down over his dead friend, his roommate and family." Like Zach, we feel more than we're aware of at first. The emotion seeps through the details. Very nice.
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